Feedback Unit 2

Hi Erica! First off, I really found your Unit 2 website section to be very informative and well thought out. Your pictures and videos went hand in hand with your sections and your different sections were very well organized and easy to to distinguish. I think your best sections were the emotional factors and implications for health and well-being. Both of these sections had tons of information and really addressed all aspects of that issue. You really did a great job of outlining the emotional differences that girls have during this stage and your graphic was well chosen and drove your points home. Your implications section did a great job of identifying potential risk factors and addressing strategies of how to approach girls in this age group. The video you chose to go along with this section was perfectly chosen.

As far as some improvements that could have been made, I do see a couple. Your psychological section was good, but I feel like you only scratched the surface! I definitely think you could have elaborated a bit more on the points you made and could have given some examples to go along with your graphic. Same goes for the social section. I think a lot of people would find this section most helpful when looking to the website for information, but it could have been elaborated a bit more. The information was great, I just wish you would have expanded on it a bit more!

The overall look and layout of your section was great and the graphics and videos you chose really went well with each section you put them with. The information you provided was helpful and easy to understand. Great job!