Feedback Unit 3

The writers of this page had all but one of the sections required of this unit. The writers have a section for Implications of the interplay between food and body but there is not yet any content for this section. The writers have sufficient amount of content in each section as well.

There was good use of headings to highlight the sections of the webpage.  The use of headings made the webpage very easy to follow along. The creators organized the page in a manner that is easy to follow and flows from one section to the next.

Overall the grammar and spelling of this page were written well.  There is only a couple instances that I could see where there could be some edits made, in two of the paragraphs there are extra spaces between words, and then in the dietary guidelines section there is one sentence that has the word “between” written twice in a row.  Other than those few things the page is written well.

The writers did well with the writing style and keeping the paragraphs cohesive but still full of vital information.

The images used by the writers were very helpful and provided good detail to the page.  The writers should be careful when completing the layout of the page to be careful that images do not cover up words.  For example this happens in the dietary guidelines section, the image of notes starts to cover the first line of words under that image.

The information provided in this webpage would be useful for healthcare providers.  In the section of risk factors the only suggestion would be narrowing down the risk factors to those only that apply to this age group.