Feedback Unit 4
Hello Erica,
I believe that you and Ashton did a good job with this section of the website. I think having an introductory video for Autism and the basis of explaining this condition is a really good idea. Through the video, you were able to drop key information that might otherwise get lost in translation. I like that the video ends with reminding people that there is a positive side to autism. As for a few formatting suggestions, I would maybe replace your first section header of "Disease" with simply "Autism Spectrum Disorder (ASD)" or something along those lines. This way if someone is quickly looking through the site, it will be in bold and the person will know what the section is about. I like that you both decided to take an alternative approach and used an image to explain the diagnosis criteria. I would suggest that within the written portion, maybe add the few key elements in which a child is diagnosed. I absolutely LOVE the video of the little girl Paige. For the reader, I would maybe try and add some demographic information into how old she might be and that they are the video is an example of a treatment that is taking place in her home. Thank you for your hard work and keep it up! You both are doing a great job!
Cheers,
Brittany Fredrick
I believe that you and Ashton did a good job with this section of the website. I think having an introductory video for Autism and the basis of explaining this condition is a really good idea. Through the video, you were able to drop key information that might otherwise get lost in translation. I like that the video ends with reminding people that there is a positive side to autism. As for a few formatting suggestions, I would maybe replace your first section header of "Disease" with simply "Autism Spectrum Disorder (ASD)" or something along those lines. This way if someone is quickly looking through the site, it will be in bold and the person will know what the section is about. I like that you both decided to take an alternative approach and used an image to explain the diagnosis criteria. I would suggest that within the written portion, maybe add the few key elements in which a child is diagnosed. I absolutely LOVE the video of the little girl Paige. For the reader, I would maybe try and add some demographic information into how old she might be and that they are the video is an example of a treatment that is taking place in her home. Thank you for your hard work and keep it up! You both are doing a great job!
Cheers,
Brittany Fredrick
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